I my opinion it could have been much better with a litle bit more cared drawinw/ character design, although in some sence it fits the mood of the story, even while the end is exagerated, there is a moral teaching into it, in this case the unnecesary dysplay of violence did not solved nothing...
this is very well done the presentation and the charaters, sadly the ending was too "interrupted", I just was expecting to see more... something more happening
to me, the extra characters and props to add thanks to v3dmm made movies look more interesting.
Think about it; cameos of celebrities and cartoon characters; and more vehicles to be depicted.
in average it was more entartaining than funny, I didnt expected the end, maybe the same end escene would have been done to add a bit of irony, but in average the script was solved and debveloped properly , maybe if the graphics were more cartoony than flashy it would have ben more point into it. the song was correct too, the part of the fair was somehow bisarre
I didnt understand it, maybe its me that dont get it, but the art was too simple also, and there was no music, and there was nothing hjappening most of the time... this is my opinion
nice animation... was entertaining to see, but like it feels you come to know not much about what happened... of course its an study piece...
the idea is interesting, the music goes good, maybe the animation looks a bit crispy sometimes but that bits the mood, the problem is that the ending looks not so proportionaly animaded, I mean the last escene, and some background would look better if more detailed, but it was entertaining to watch it.
all looks quite propotional fiting , the music and animation , and the story, I mean, all went cool all the way... the ending was funny , a bit undefined, but that was the idea so...
well, I think I think the story was funny in most of parts, but it was a bit downed because of the ending, the voice acting was funny, but the character design would have a bit more cared in some aspect it would have been more interesting to see...
Yeah, maybe in future cartoons I could make the story a little longer so that I can develop the characters more. Thanks for the feedback, it's really helpful :)
it was funny but the last part came too fast
mmm... few animation
few animation :D
Yeah I hear ya. I passed the class though.
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