I my opinion it could have been much better with a litle bit more cared drawinw/ character design, although in some sence it fits the mood of the story, even while the end is exagerated, there is a moral teaching into it, in this case the unnecesary dysplay of violence did not solved nothing...
this is very well done the presentation and the charaters, sadly the ending was too "interrupted", I just was expecting to see more... something more happening
to me, the extra characters and props to add thanks to v3dmm made movies look more interesting.
Think about it; cameos of celebrities and cartoon characters; and more vehicles to be depicted.
in average it was more entartaining than funny, I didnt expected the end, maybe the same end escene would have been done to add a bit of irony, but in average the script was solved and debveloped properly , maybe if the graphics were more cartoony than flashy it would have ben more point into it. the song was correct too, the part of the fair was somehow bisarre
for a first game
this game was entertaining to play, certainly if it was longer it woud have been more interesting even if it had mor things to do on it, it felt like there was some ironic humor on it about the simpllicity of the game, that was funny too. the idea of playing clicking on things is nothing new, but if you work on the concept it can be fun if you add the memory factor as in this game... it was quite good for a first game
I'm glad there are people out there giving constructive criticism. I'll look into your idea.
the engine fits well and is easy enough to play and a litle bit demanding at some points, its funny and the graphics looks properly animated, if the character had a real shape and a little story it could have been almost a ten
You're right, it kind of lacks a storyline, but do not fear, because sometime, somewhere I will make more!
I give you:
I did´was able to understand what is this suposed to play, it says press space to select character, but only expands a select graphic but nothing done at all, and there are too much buttons opening other sites window, I give you 2 points only for the presentation....
good proportions and contrast levels
good level of contrast
it has a good level of contrast, the only part that seems a bit delined or too much traced is a part in the background at the left, the other side has the light very well proportioned, that side its fine, but seems to have the same focus as the front side... it is complicated to achieve I know, but I just tried to tell you in case you didnt noticed it :D
Thanks for the review! I had to finish part of the background faster than the rest of it so that I could meet a deadline, so it's didn't have as much attention payed to it as the foreground.
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